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motivation letter for stipenduim Hungaricum Scholarship

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With this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying in Hungary through the Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship Program. I would like to introduce myself as a candidate, my name is Ms. Kadingkham Xaiyavong. I would like to apply for a bachelor's degree in Industrial Design Engineering offered by Obuda University. I have decided to apply to this faculty because I am interested in designing and producing things. It is my preferred faculty, and therefore this program is suitable for me. I anticipate that once I graduate from university, I will be able to perform a variety of tasks. Whether it is fashion or starting my own product design company. I had experience making things in Design Technology class while in high school, I even created my own flower pots out of wood planks and silkworms. Furthermore, I learned how to sew. Although my experience and knowledge are currently insufficient, I am open to whatever experiences life at Obuda University may bring me and hope to achieve them through your Industrial design engineering program. Studying at your school would allow me to hone my design skills while also having fun, as I did some research on universities and discovered that Obuda University is the 11th most prestigious university in the country, as well as the largest university of technology in the country. This is proof that this program will undoubtedly assist me in achieving my objectives. My country is still developing, and the faculty of Industrial Design Engineering is not widely known in my country. This program will familiarize me with Hungary's culture and educational system. This is a great chance for me since when I return home, I intend to use the culture and knowledge that I have gained in Hungary to disseminate and develop more interesting Lao products for export to another country and become a broadly known product. If I am chosen as a scholarship student to study in Hungary, I am well prepared to face future obstacles and am eager to learn a new language and culture. Aside from that, I am eager to master new skills from Obuda University.
With this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying in Hungary through the
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Stipendium
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Hungaricum
Scholarship
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Program
. I would like to introduce myself as a candidate, my name is Ms.
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Kadingkham
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Xaiyavong
. I would like to apply for a bachelor's degree in Industrial
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Design
Engineering offered by
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Obuda
University.

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I
have decided to apply to this faculty
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because
I
am interested
in designing and producing things. It is my preferred faculty, and
therefore
this
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program
is suitable for me. I anticipate that once I graduate from
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university
, I will be able to perform a variety of tasks. Whether it is fashion or starting my
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own
product
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design
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company
.

I had experience making things in
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Design
Technology
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class
while in high school, I even created my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
flower pots out of wood planks and silkworms.
Furthermore
, I learned how to sew. Although my experience and knowledge are
currently
insufficient, I am open to whatever experiences life at
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Obuda
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University
may bring me and hope to achieve them through your Industrial
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design
engineering program.

Studying at your school would
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allow
me to hone my
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design
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skills
while
also
having fun, as I did
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some
research on
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universities
and discovered that
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Obuda
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University
is the 11th most prestigious
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university
in the
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country
,
as well
as the largest
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university
of technology in the
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country
. This is proof that this
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program
will
undoubtedly
assist me in achieving my objectives.

My
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country
is
still
developing, and the faculty of Industrial
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Design
Engineering is not
widely
known in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
. This
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program
will familiarize me with Hungary's culture and educational system. This is a great chance for me since when I return home, I intend to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the culture and knowledge that I have gained in Hungary to disseminate and develop more interesting Lao products for export to another
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country
and become a
broadly
known product.

If I
am chosen
as a scholarship student to study in Hungary, I am
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well prepared
to face future obstacles and am eager to learn a new language and culture. Aside from that, I am eager to master new
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skills
from
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Obuda
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University
.
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IELTS letter motivation letter for stipenduim Hungaricum Scholarship

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355 words
6.0
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