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Apology for lost book in the lyceum

Apology for lost book in the lyceum 3WrXY
Dear SirI am writing to apologise for lost your book. W hat can I say, first I am sorry for this book. I am angry, not happy. I give you a new book, but, it is very expensive. It's cost is five thousand soum. I know, you also want read this book. name of this book is, , Have you got your ticket? ''. I also like this book. I give you on Monday. Wait me until Monday. I want to read and finish this book. Event continued so. When I was reading, our instructor called me for dinner. I go and I have a dinner. Then I came back and view all places but I did not find it. I remember during the day. But I could not find and I went to the bed. I remember again in the morning. I search it again. but I could not find it. I am shying for this event. I search day by day. Then I find and bring to lyceum but I could not find you. I promise you I bring it next week. Because I have no much money. so I give next week. Because I money in next week. Thank you for taking my apology letterBest wishesSultonov
Dear
SirI
am
writing to
apologise
for lost your
book
. W hat can I say,
first
I am sorry for this
book
. I am angry, not happy. I give you a new
book
,
but
, it is
very
expensive.
It's
cost is five thousand
soum
. I know, you
also
want read this
book
.
name
of this
book
is,
,
Have you
got
your ticket? ''. I
also
like this
book
. I give you on Monday. Wait me until Monday. I want to read and finish this
book
.
Event
continued
so
. When I was reading, our instructor called me for dinner. I go and I
have a dinner
. Then I came back and view all places
but
I did not
find
it. I remember during the day.
But
I could not
find
and I went to the bed. I remember again in the morning. I search it again.
but
I could not
find
it. I am shying for this
event
. I search day by day. Then I
find
and bring to lyceum
but
I could not
find
you. I promise you I bring it
next
week.
Because
I have no much money.
so
I give
next
week.
Because
I money
in
next
week. Thank you for taking my apology
letterBest
wishesSultonov
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IELTS letter Apology for lost book in the lyceum

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
208 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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