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answering friend question

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Dear Sarah, I think it is a very good idea and you should do it because mobile phone will help you a lot in your daily life. In my country, everyone owns their own mobile phone to communicate with people, relax and work. If you have a cell phone, you can call anyone anywhere, chat with them, have online meetings, or discuss problems at work and life. Not only that, but mobile phones can also help you relax such as playing games, watching movies, listening to music, or more especially, paying money online and helping you order necessary items when you can't go out during the Covid-19 pandemic. In summary, mobile phones are necessary and I think you should own one for yourself.

Dear Sarah,

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think
 it is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 and you should do it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you a lot in your daily life. In my country, everyone This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possesses
owns
 their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 to communicate with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
, relax and work. If you have a cell You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
, you can call anyone anywhere, chat with them, have online meetings, or discuss problems at work and life. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 that, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phones
 can also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you relax such as playing games, watching movies, listening to music, or more especially
, paying money online and helping you order necessary items when you can't go out during the Covid-19 pandemic. In summary, mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phones
 are necessary and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 you should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 one for yourself. 