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An overseas college is offering scholarship to students. Write a letter to the college Authorities. In your letter tell about the scholarship, how are you eligible, how will you return the loan

An overseas college is offering scholarship to students. Write a letter to the college Authorities. In your letter tell about the scholarship, how are you eligible, how will you return the loan DlO2A
Dear madam, I am writing this letter to obtain detailed information about the scholarship assistance offered by your college as published on your official website. I always have a dream to pursue my education in Canada so I want to enroll in your college next year under the course of computer database management. however, due to unforeseen and unfortunate circumstances, I now find myself in financial difficulties. I would appreciate it if you could steer me on the right path for the scholarship program. My education certificates demonstrate my meritorious grades. Moreover, I am a sports person and played at a national level many times. Also, I have brought laurels to my institution through my achievements. Nowadays, I am working with a sports club so I have the means to pay back if this loan is confirmed. My employer promised me to arrange a monthly regular deduction salary to the college bank account. I hope you will consider my application and provide me with the opportunity to study further. Looking forward to hearing from you, Yours faithfully,
Dear madam,

I am writing this letter to obtain detailed information about the scholarship assistance offered by your college as published on your official website.

I always have a dream to pursue my education in Canada
so
I want to enroll in your college
next
year under the course of computer database management.
however
, due to unforeseen and unfortunate circumstances, I
now
find myself in financial difficulties. I would appreciate it if you could steer me on the right path for the scholarship program.

My education certificates demonstrate my meritorious grades.
Moreover
, I am a sports person and played at a national level
many
times.
Also
, I have brought laurels to my institution through my achievements. Nowadays, I am working with a sports club
so
I have the means to pay back if this loan
is confirmed
. My employer promised me to arrange a monthly regular deduction salary to the college bank account.

I hope you will consider my application and provide me with the opportunity to study
further
.

Looking forward to hearing from you,

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter An overseas college is offering scholarship to students. Write a letter to the college Authorities. In your letter tell about the scholarship, how are you eligible, how will you return the loan

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  American English
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177 words
6.0
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