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Task 1: Informal Letter A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with hi/her on your next holidays. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend In your letter, Thank him/her for the invitation Explain why you cannot come Ask him/her about other times to visit

Task 1: Informal Letter A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with hi/her on your next holidays. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend In your letter, Thank him/her for the invitation Explain why you cannot come Ask him/her about other times to visit 21dj
Dear Naupul, I hope this letter finds you well. It’s been long time since we have met. I’m writing this letter to thank you for inviting me for inviting me for upcoming holidays in Spain between 20th December to 4th January. However, during these holidays my parents are planning to visit Canada and they have already booked their flight tickets long back in March. We’re planning to visit Niagra Waterfalls, Ontario and Toronto as they are visiting Canada for the 1st time. Hence, I won’t be able to join you on this vacation. I wish I could. By the way, by any chance if it’s feasible can we plan to meet in next vacation in the Summer/ Spring? I would definitely like to visit Spain and explore the locations we discussed last time on call. Let me know if you are available between June to August. Looking forward to hear from you… Lots of Love, Rahul
Dear
Naupul
,

I hope this letter finds you well. It’s been long time since we have met. I’m writing this letter to thank you for inviting me for inviting me for upcoming holidays in Spain between 20th December to 4th January.

However
, during these holidays my parents are planning to visit
Canada and
they have already booked their flight tickets long back in March. We’re planning to visit
Niagra
Waterfalls, Ontario and Toronto as they are visiting Canada for the 1st time.
Hence
, I won’t be able to
join
you on this vacation. I wish I could.

By the way, by any chance if it’s feasible can we plan to
meet
in
next
vacation in the Summer/ Spring? I would definitely like to visit Spain and explore the locations we discussed last time on call.
Let
me know if you are available between June to August.

Looking forward
to hear
from you…

Lots of
Love
,

Rahul
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IELTS letter Task 1: Informal Letter A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with hi/her on your next holidays. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend In your letter, Thank him/her for the invitation Explain why you cannot come Ask him/her about other times to visit

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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