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1. Write a letter to Da Nang General Sciences Library after you discover that you have accidentally taken of three of their library books home with you to your hometown.

1. Write a letter to Da Nang General Sciences Library after you discover that you have accidentally taken of three of their library books home with you to your hometown. b2w6X
Dear Mrs/Mr, I am writing to give my sincerest apology for my mistake. I regret to say that I have accidentally taken of three of Da Nang General Sciences Library books home with me to my hometown. I must apologize for you about this inconvenience. The reason for this has been that I was worried about the covid-19 epidemic so I had to pack up to go my hometown as soon as possible and I forgot to return the book. I hope you understand that that was never my intention. The Covid-19 epidemic is no longer serious. I am coming to Da Nang next week, so I promise to return the book to library. I very much regret for the inconvenience has caused to you. Please feel free to let me know of your thoughts and concerns over this matter. You can reach me at hoangiang1211@gmail. com. Thanks Yours sincerely Hoang Giang
Dear Mrs/Mr,

I am writing to give my sincerest apology for my mistake.

I regret to say that I have
accidentally
taken of three of
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Da
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Nang
General Sciences Library books home with me to my hometown.
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I
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must
apologize for you about this inconvenience.

The reason for this has been that I
was worried
about the
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid-19
epidemic
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so
I had to pack up to go my hometown as
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soon
as possible and I forgot to return the book. I hope you understand that that was never my intention.

The Covid-19 epidemic is no longer serious. I am coming to
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Da
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Nang
next
week,
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so
I promise to return the book to library.

I
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very
much regret for the inconvenience has caused to you.
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Please
feel free to
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let
me know of your thoughts and concerns over this matter. You can reach me at hoangiang1211@gmail.
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com
.

Thanks

Yours
sincerely


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IELTS letter 1. Write a letter to Da Nang General Sciences Library after you discover that you have accidentally taken of three of their library books home with you to your hometown.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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