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You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, you should tell: • explain how you knew about the plans • describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighbourhood. • suggest a possible solution to the problem.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am this letter to discuss about the construction planning of an airport nearby our area. Yesterday evening, when I was coming from work, suddenly I saw an advertisement banner on the main road, where it mentioned that extreme upcoming an airport project soon at Gandhi Nagar. Surprisingly, work will be going to start by end of the month. I would like to say that being a resident of this locality, there are many cons of having an airport here because it makes huge impact on all age group people’s health, especially children and older one. Also, student may lose their concentration on the study, whereas loud noise that come from such places cause many diseases related to brain and ear, which may lead to deaf a person permanently. I would suggest you that please consider it serious problem for local people and forward our request to higher authority to change the location. It would be better if they make plan outside of the city where it will be convenient travel for everyone. I hope that you will look into the matter seriously. I look forward to your positive response. Yours faithfully Amrit Kaur
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am this letter to
Did you mean simply "discuss the"? You do not need the word "about" here.
discuss about the
construction planning of an airport nearby our area.

Yesterday evening, when I was coming from work,
suddenly
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
an advertisement banner on the main road, where it mentioned that extreme upcoming an airport project
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
at Gandhi Nagar.
Surprisingly
, work will be going to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the month.

I would like to say that being a resident of this locality, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
cons of having an airport here
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
huge impact on all age group
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
’s health,
especially
children and older one.
Also
, student may lose their concentration on the study, whereas loud noise that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
from such places cause
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
diseases related to brain and ear, which may lead to deaf a person
permanently
.

I would suggest you that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
consider it serious problem for local
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
and forward our request to higher authority to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the location. It would be better if they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
plan
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "outside".
outside of
the city where it will be convenient travel for everyone. I hope that you will look into the matter
seriously
.

I look forward to your
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response.

Yours
faithfully


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IELTS letter You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, you should tell: • explain how you knew about the plans • describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighbourhood. • suggest a possible solution to the problem.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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