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An email: My favourite film What is your favourite film? Write a letter to your pen friend. Explain why you like the film and why you think your pen friend should watch it.

An email: My favourite film What is your favourite film? Write a letter to your pen friend. Explain why you like the film and why you think your pen friend should watch it. 3aPdw
Hi pen friend, How are you? I am really excited to talk with you, What have you been doing these days? Nowadays I have a lot of free time, so I have seen a lot of films, I especially rewatched my favourite one "Leon the professional" it is about a hitman and a little girl with crossed paths, it has many action parts, but also a deep and interesting plot with an amazing ending. You have to watch that film I think it is the type you like, have you been waching any films lately? Lots of love, your friend.
Hi
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pen friend
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How are you? I am
really
excited to talk with you, What have you been doing these days?

Nowadays I have
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a lot of
free time,
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so
I have
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seen
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a lot of
films, I
especially
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rewatched
my
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favourite
one
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Leon the professional
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it is about a
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hitman
and a
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little
girl with crossed paths, it has
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many
action parts,
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but
also
a deep and interesting plot with an amazing ending.

You
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have to
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watch
that film I
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think
it is the type you like, have you been
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waching
any films lately?

Lots of
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love
, your friend.

IELTS letter An email: My favourite film What is your favourite film? Write a letter to your pen friend. Explain why you like the film and why you think your pen friend should watch it.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
100 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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