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An application letter where dean the university

An application letter where dean the university 3Wga5
I am very interested in your advertisement which advertised on channel named uzreport and I should like to apply to be a member of your university. I am twenty three years old and obtained the korean language degree in 2021. I feel I have many of important qualifications needed for this job. I am presently working as a korean teacher in the department in mega education center where I have been for the last one year. In addition to this I participate in football team. l am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks simultaneously I am currently looking for a position that will allow me to develop my skills and expreince I enjoy several activities such as playing football and guitar. I am sociable and I can get on well with my new people easily. I am an enthusiastic and energetic employee and I feel that I am well qualified for this job. I would be grateful if you could consider me for this position
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interested in your advertisement which advertised on channel named
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uzreport
and I should like to apply to be a member of your university. I am
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twenty three
years
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and obtained the
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korean
language degree in 2021.
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feel I have
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many
of
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qualifications needed for this job.
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am
presently
working as a
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korean
teacher in the department in mega education center where I have been for the last one year.
In addition
to this I participate in football team.
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l
am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks
simultaneously
I am
currently
looking for a position that will
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allow
me to develop my
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skills
and
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expreince
I enjoy several activities such as playing football and guitar. I am sociable and I can
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get
on well with my new
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people
easily
. I am an enthusiastic and energetic employee and I feel that I am well qualified for this job.
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I
would be grateful if you could consider me for this
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IELTS letter An application letter where dean the university

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
165 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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