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You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant

You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant qjJw

Dear Sir, My aim of writing this letter is to inform you about our dissatisfaction regarding food service in your restaurant. Our organisation members usually meet in your restaurant and like the food every time they eat. However, we faced unexpected experience in our recent visit to your restaurant on April 20. We ordered a meal of curry, a mix of vegetables and bread. Moreover, it took 1 hour for the preparation, and it was acceptable due to the weekend rush. After that, the food taste was not good and bread half-baked also looked not fresh. We complained about food to the supervisor, and her behavior was so rude. At the end, I would like to give a piece of advice, give priority to food quality which every customer wants and provide training to staff on how they deal with clients in a polite way. Hope to hear from you soon, and you will never disappoint me and my staff. Thanks.

Dear Sir,

My aim of writing this letter is to inform you about our dissatisfaction regarding You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 service in your restaurant. Our Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.organization
organisation
 members usually
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 in your restaurant and like the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 every time they eat. However
, we faced unexpected experience in our recent visit to your restaurant on April 20.

We ordered a meal of curry, a mix of vegetables and bread. Moreover
, it took 1 hour for the preparation, and it was acceptable due to the weekend rush. After that, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 taste was not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 and bread half-baked also
 looked not fresh. We complained about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 to the supervisor, and her behavior was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 rude.

At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, I would like to give a piece of advice, give priority to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 quality which every customer wants and provide training Did you mean "staffing"? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.staffing
to staff
 on how they deal with clients Consider replacing "in a polite way" with the adverb for "polite"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a polite way
.

Hope to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
, and you will never disappoint me and my staff.

Thanks. 