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Dear John, I am writing to inform you that I will discontinue my evening course on Business Management and Marketing.

Dear John, I am writing to inform you that I will discontinue my evening course on Business Management and Marketing. As you are aware, I am currently employed in a large multinational company as a Project Manager, which demands intensive project planning, designing and implementation. Furthermore, we are in the initial stage of artitectural structure programming and my manager has given me double the task to complete which eventually consumes my entire evening. Another major reason is that, I will be travelling next week to London for a month long training on Project Management. As a result, I will not be able to attend the class. Hence, I would like to request you to postpone my ongoing evening course for a month and I will resume the class from 1st December 2020. Please explain the formalities to be completed in order to hold the course until next batch. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Tahira
Dear John,

I am writing to inform you that I will discontinue my evening course on Business Management and Marketing.

As you are aware, I am
currently
employed in a large multinational
company
as a Project Manager, which demands intensive project planning, designing and implementation.
Furthermore
, we are in the initial stage of
artitectural
structure programming and my manager has
given
me double the task to complete which
eventually
consumes my entire evening. Another major reason is that, I will be travelling
next
week to London for a
month long
training on Project Management.
As a result
, I will not be able to attend the
class
.

Hence
, I would like to request you to postpone my ongoing evening course for a month and I will resume the
class
from 1st December 2020.
Please
explain
the formalities to
be completed
in order to hold the course until
next
batch.

I look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Tahira
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IELTS letter Dear John, I am writing to inform you that I will discontinue my evening course on Business Management and Marketing.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
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