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You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say where and when the class will be held give reasons why you think your friend might be interested suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear David, I hope you are doing good. As you might be aware, the local collage has introduced a few new courses considering interest of community. I found cooking class very interesting and I am planning to join it to improve my skills. The new batch is starting from the next Monday, 15th January. The morning batch is from 10 am to 12 pm and evening batch is 6pm to 8pm. I am preferring evening batch after the daywork. I am aware that you have dream to open restaurant in future. The cooking class will help you to get the basic facts correct and enhance your cooking as well as management skills. I suppose we both can enroll this course to pursue our special interest in food. I have collected the course material from the college to review the schedule. Let us meet on Saturday at 7 pm so we can discuss and decide on our enrollment. I can't wait to meet you and discuss about this exciting opportunity, stay safe. Regards, Harry
Dear David,

I hope you are doing
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. As you might be aware, the local collage has introduced a few new courses considering interest of community. I found cooking
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class
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very
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interesting and
I am planning to
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join
it to
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improve
my
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skills
. The new
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batch
is starting from the
next
Did you mean to refer to the current year? 15th January 2021 is not a Monday, but a Friday.
Monday, 15th January
. The morning
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batch
is from 10 am to 12 pm and evening
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batch
is 6pm to 8pm. I
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am preferring
evening
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batch
after the
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daywork
.

I am aware that you have dream to open restaurant
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in future
. The cooking
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class
will
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help
you to
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get
the basic facts correct and enhance your cooking
as well
as management
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skills
. I suppose we both can enroll this course to pursue our special interest in food. I have collected the course material from the college to review the schedule.
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Let
us
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meet
on Saturday at 7 pm
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so
we can discuss and decide on our enrollment.

I can't wait to
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meet
you and
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discuss about this
exciting opportunity, stay safe.

Regards,

Harry
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IELTS letter You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say where and when the class will be held give reasons why you think your friend might be interested suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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  American English
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172 words
5.5
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