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You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say where and when the class will be held give reasons why you think your friend might be interested suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear David, I hope you are doing good. As you might be aware, the local collage has introduced a few new courses considering interest of community. I found cooking class very interesting and I am planning to join it to improve my skills. The new batch is starting from the next Monday, 15th January. The morning batch is from 10 am to 12 pm and evening batch is 6pm to 8pm. I am preferring evening batch after the daywork. I am aware that you have dream to open restaurant in future. The cooking class will help you to get the basic facts correct and enhance your cooking as well as management skills. I suppose we both can enroll this course to pursue our special interest in food. I have collected the course material from the college to review the schedule. Let us meet on Saturday at 7 pm so we can discuss and decide on our enrollment. I can't wait to meet you and discuss about this exciting opportunity, stay safe. Regards, Harry

Dear David,

I hope you are doing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
. As you might be aware, the local collage has introduced a few new courses considering interest of community. I found cooking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).interesting, and
interesting and
 I am planning to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 it to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
. The new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withparcelbundlevolumeclusteramountlot
batch
 is starting from the next
Did you mean to refer to the current year? 15th January 2021 is not a Monday, but a Friday.
Monday, 15th January
. The morning You use this word too often, consider replacing it withparcelbundlevolumeclusteramountlot
batch
 is from 10 am to 12 pm and evening You use this word too often, consider replacing it withparcelbundlevolumeclusteramountlot
batch
 is 6pm to 8pm. I The verb ‘prefer’ can be stative. If ‘preferring’ describes a state, change the sentence structure and use the base form of the verb.
am preferring
 evening You use this word too often, consider replacing it withparcelbundlevolumeclusteramountlot
batch
 after the Possible spelling mistake found.day work
daywork
.

I am aware that you have dream to open restaurant The phrase ‘in future’ is British English. Did you mean: “in the future”?in the future
in future
. The cooking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the basic facts correct and enhance your cooking as well
 as management This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
. I suppose we both can enroll this course to pursue our special interest in food. I have collected the course material from the college to review the schedule. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 us This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 on Saturday at 7 pm This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we can discuss and decide on our enrollment.

I can't wait to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you and Did you mean simply “discuss this”? You do not need the word “about” here.discuss this
discuss about this
 exciting opportunity, stay safe.

Regards,

Harry