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A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of the course you took at the university explain why you recommend the university give some advice about how to apply

A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of the course you took at the university explain why you recommend the university give some advice about how to apply p7gL
Dear Victor, Hope this letter finds you in good health and spirit. I sure also would like to thank you for trusting me with such an important matter. So, here is what I have to say in response to your queries about the Pharmacy course at Monash University. I understand that you also want to pursue a bachelor degree in Pharmacy from Monash University which I attended. By the way, pharmacy is not an easy subject since it involves very complex techniques and skills of preparing and dispensing medicines or drugs, and thus saving human life also. Students attending pharmacy degrees will learn how different types of drugs affect the human body and mind and how they interact when mixed together. Of course, the good thing is that the university, you are choosing, has some of the best pharmacy syllabuses, faculty members and laboratory facilities to teach you just what you need to succeed. So, just visit the website of the university at www. monash. edu to learn more about how to apply online, or just call the admission officer to ask him or her to send you the admission form and other necessary papers in the mail, if you want to proceed further. Take care. Se you soon. Warm wishes, Mitchel
Dear Victor,

Hope this letter finds you in
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good
health and spirit. I sure
also
would like to thank you for trusting me with such an
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important
matter.
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So
, here is what I
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have to
say in response to your queries about the
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Pharmacy
course at Monash University.

I understand that you
also
want to pursue a bachelor degree in
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Pharmacy
from Monash University which I attended. By the way,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pharmacy
is not an easy subject since it involves
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
complex techniques and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
of preparing and dispensing medicines or drugs, and
thus
saving human life
also
. Students attending
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pharmacy
degrees will learn how
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different
types of drugs affect the human body and mind and how they interact when mixed together.
Of course
, the
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good
thing is that the university, you are choosing, has
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some
of the best
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pharmacy
syllabuses, faculty members and laboratory facilities to teach you
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just
what you need to succeed.

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So
,
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just
visit the website of the university at
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www
.
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monash
.
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edu
to learn more about how to apply online, or
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
call the admission officer to ask him or her to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
you the admission form and other necessary papers in the mail, if you want to proceed
further
.

Take care. Se you
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soon
.

Warm wishes,

Mitchel
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of the course you took at the university explain why you recommend the university give some advice about how to apply

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  American English
7 paragraphs
211 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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