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You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter: - Tell them how long you are staying - Ask for some suggestions for what to do - Find out if there are any local events happening at the time

You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter: - Tell them how long you are staying - Ask for some suggestions for what to do - Find out if there are any local events happening at the time q27E
Dear Sir or Madam, I am planning to visit Nadiad next month for a week. I would like you to send me some information about the town. I am coming on 2nd February and I will stay till 10th February which is almost a week. Actually, I am not aware about this town. I am staying in New park hotel. Please suggest any shopping malls to visit at nearby place. I heard a lot about heritage building located inside the city. Please provide me map and details how to reach there. I also require car as I would like to visit local village and want to explore more about their culture. I am looking forward to attend any local event coming on that weekend. I would be very happy to be a part of that event. Please provide all the necessary information. I am looking forward for your reply. Yours faithfully, Darek Jones
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am planning to visit
Nadiad
next
month for a week. I would like you to
send
me
some
information about the town.

I
am coming on 2nd February and I will stay till 10th February which is almost a week. Actually, I am not aware about this town. I am staying in New park hotel.
Please
suggest any shopping malls to visit at nearby place. I heard a lot about heritage building located inside the city.
Please
provide me map and
details
how to reach there. I
also
require car as I would like to visit local village and want to explore more about their culture. I am looking forward
to attend
any local
event
coming on that weekend.
I
would be
very
happy to be a part of that
event
.

Please
provide all the necessary information. I am looking forward for your reply.

Yours
faithfully
,

Darek
Jones
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IELTS letter You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter: - Tell them how long you are staying - Ask for some suggestions for what to do - Find out if there are any local events happening at the time

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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