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You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter: - Tell them how long you are staying - Ask for some suggestions for what to do - Find out if there are any local events happening at the time

You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter: - Tell them how long you are staying - Ask for some suggestions for what to do - Find out if there are any local events happening at the time q27E

Dear Sir or Madam, I am planning to visit Nadiad next month for a week. I would like you to send me some information about the town. I am coming on 2nd February and I will stay till 10th February which is almost a week. Actually, I am not aware about this town. I am staying in New park hotel. Please suggest any shopping malls to visit at nearby place. I heard a lot about heritage building located inside the city. Please provide me map and details how to reach there. I also require car as I would like to visit local village and want to explore more about their culture. I am looking forward to attend any local event coming on that weekend. I would be very happy to be a part of that event. Please provide all the necessary information. I am looking forward for your reply. Yours faithfully, Darek Jones

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am planning to visit Possible spelling mistake found.NadiaNaiad
Nadiad
next
 month for a week. I would like you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 information about the town.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am coming on 2nd February and I will stay till 10th February which is almost a week. Actually, I am not aware about this town. I am staying in New park hotel. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 suggest any shopping malls to visit at nearby place. I heard a lot about heritage building located inside the city. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 provide me map and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 how to reach there. I also
 require car as I would like to visit local village and want to explore more about their culture. I am looking forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to attending".to attending
to attend
 any local This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 coming on that weekend. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy to be a part of that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 provide all the necessary information. I am looking forward for your reply.

Yours faithfully
,

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Darek
 Jones

IELTS letter You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter: - Tell them how long you are staying - Ask for some suggestions for what to do - Find out if there are any local events happening at the time

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

152 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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