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After having been involved in an accident, you were looked after by another person. Write a special letter to express your thanks.

After having been involved in an accident, you were looked after by another person. Write a special letter to express your thanks. Kj69
Dear Mr. Jones, I am writing to tell you how grateful I am for your kindest help when I was involved in that terrible drowning accident. I remember I was knocked down by a big wave when I was surfing. My surfboard was washed away and the constant waves made me exhausted. Just when I was about to sink, you swam over to me and dragged me to the shore. If it was not for your timely assistance, giving me first aid and sending me to a hospital immediately, I might have died. The doctor told me that there was no water in my lungs, and I would fully recover in a few days. Everyone agrees that it was your quick response in this emergency that has led to this satisfactory result. Please accept my most sincere thanks. I hope I can see you soon to express my heartfelt gratitude in person. Yours sincerely, Mia Smith
Dear Mr. Jones,

I am writing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you how grateful I am for your kindest
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
when I
was involved
in that terrible drowning accident.

I remember I
was knocked
down by a
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big
wave when I was surfing. My surfboard
was washed
away and the constant waves made me exhausted.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Just
when I was about to sink, you swam over to me and dragged me to the shore. If it was not for your timely assistance, giving me
first
aid and sending me to a hospital immediately, I might have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
died
.

The doctor
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me that there was no water in my lungs, and I would
fully
recover in a few days. Everyone
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agrees
that it was your quick response in this emergency that has led to this satisfactory result.
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Please
accept my most sincere thanks. I hope I can
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see
you
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soon
to express my heartfelt gratitude in person.

Yours
sincerely
,

Mia Smith
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IELTS letter After having been involved in an accident, you were looked after by another person. Write a special letter to express your thanks.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
155 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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