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After experiencing health issues because of an unhealthy lifestyle, you decided to make a change. Write an email (120 - 200 words) to a friend to tell him/her:

After experiencing health issues because of an unhealthy lifestyle, you decided to make a change. Write an email (120 - 200 words) to a friend to tell him/her: A3GQe
Hi Hieu, How are you doing? I just went through a rough time last week. I fainted when I stood up. Then my brother took me to the hospital. The doctor said that I had been a drop in blood pressure and vitamin deficiency. Just because my mom couldn’t hustle me when I went to Sai Gon, and I skipped my breakfast regularly. The doctor advised me to eat meals regularly unless I need a stomach ulcer. Therefore, I waked up earlier to have breakfast. I also did exercises and played badminton. Now I feel better and want to share that experience with you. Thanks for your patience! Your friend,
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went through a rough time last week. I fainted when I stood up. Then my brother took me to the hospital. The doctor said that I had been a drop in blood pressure and vitamin deficiency.
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my mom couldn’t hustle me when I went to
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, and I skipped my breakfast
regularly
. The doctor advised me to eat meals
regularly
unless I need a stomach ulcer.
Therefore
, I waked up earlier to have breakfast. I
also
did
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exercises
and played badminton.
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Now
I feel better and want to share that experience with you. Thanks for your patience!

Your friend,
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IELTS letter After experiencing health issues because of an unhealthy lifestyle, you decided to make a change. Write an email (120 - 200 words) to a friend to tell him/her:

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  American English
3 paragraphs
110 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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