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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. k3QR
Dear Anthony, I'm Mark Edwin, whom you have admitted in Saint King Hospital of the 10th of March. I'm writing this letter to thank you for your immediate response to the accident and admitting me in the hospital. The doctors said that if you would not have admitted me at the right time in the hospital, my condition would have been worse and I might have gone into a coma. This would have left my wife and children devastated. I once again thank you from the bottom of my heart for your generous heart. I have been discharged from the hospital two day ago and doing well. I would take this opportunity to invite you and your family to my house for lunch this weekend as a way to express my gratitude. Do let me know your free time so that we can plan the lunch accordingly. I would be waiting for you reply. Thank you once again for your time. Yours Sincerely, Mark Edwin.
Dear Anthony,

I'm Mark Edwin, whom you have admitted in Saint King Hospital of the 10th of March. I'm writing this letter to thank you for your immediate response to the accident and admitting me in the hospital.

The doctors said that if you would not have admitted me at the right time in the hospital, my condition would have been worse and I might have gone into a coma. This would have
left
my wife and children devastated. I once again thank you from the bottom of my heart for your generous heart. I have
been discharged
from the hospital two day ago and doing well.

I
would take this opportunity to invite you and your family to my
house
for lunch this weekend as a way to express my gratitude. Do
let
me know your free time
so
that we can plan the lunch
accordingly
. I would be waiting for you reply. Thank you once again for your time.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Mark Edwin.
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IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

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  American English
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6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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