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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. k3QR

Dear Anthony, I'm Mark Edwin, whom you have admitted in Saint King Hospital of the 10th of March. I'm writing this letter to thank you for your immediate response to the accident and admitting me in the hospital. The doctors said that if you would not have admitted me at the right time in the hospital, my condition would have been worse and I might have gone into a coma. This would have left my wife and children devastated. I once again thank you from the bottom of my heart for your generous heart. I have been discharged from the hospital two day ago and doing well. I would take this opportunity to invite you and your family to my house for lunch this weekend as a way to express my gratitude. Do let me know your free time so that we can plan the lunch accordingly. I would be waiting for you reply. Thank you once again for your time. Yours Sincerely, Mark Edwin.

Dear Anthony,

I'm Mark Edwin, whom you have admitted in Saint King Hospital of the 10th of March. I'm writing this letter to thank you for your immediate response to the accident and admitting me in the hospital.

The doctors said that if you would not have admitted me at the right time in the hospital, my condition would have been worse and I might have gone into a coma. This would have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 my wife and children devastated. I once again thank you from the bottom of my heart for your generous heart. I have been discharged
 from the hospital two day ago and doing well.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would take this opportunity to invite you and your family to my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 for lunch this weekend as a way to express my gratitude. Do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know your free time This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that we can plan the lunch accordingly
. I would be waiting for you reply. Thank you once again for your time.

Yours Sincerely
,

Mark Edwin. 

IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

165 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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