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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest an interesting part of the city to live in • describe the public transport in your city • say how your friend can meet new people there

A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest an interesting part of the city to live in • describe the public transport in your city • say how your friend can meet new people there d2PP
Hello Katya, I hope you are doing well. It has been ages since the last time we chatted. I’m writing you this letter to tell you where you should consider in renting a studio. In the UAE I would suggest you to first look at an area called JLT, if you can’t find there you should find in Marina – it’s just 5 minutes by walk. Both JLT and Marina have metro run 24 hours expect in the weekend, also recently the transportation authority has launched an app where you can book a taxi at any given time. Now, in the weekend there are many clubs having live music, some of those music bands are coming from the UK. We can plan a night out once you are all settled. Also, you’ll have a chance to make some new friends as those bars usually have all type of people. I really can’t wait to see you in Dubai city, we’ll have a lot of fun. Best wishes, Abdelghani
Hello Katya,

I hope you are doing well. It has been ages since the last time we chatted.

I’m writing you this letter to
tell
you where you should consider in renting a studio. In the UAE I would suggest you to
first
look at an area called
JLT
, if you can’t find there you should find in Marina
it’s
just
5 minutes by walk.

Both
JLT
and Marina have metro run 24 hours
expect
in the weekend,
also
recently the transportation authority has launched an app where you can book a taxi at any
given
time.

Now
, in the weekend there are
many
clubs having
live
music,
some
of those music bands are coming from the UK. We can plan a night out once you are all settled.
Also
, you’ll have a chance to
make
some
new friends as those bars
usually
have all type of
people
.

I
really
can’t wait to
see
you in Dubai city, we’ll have
a lot of
fun.

Best wishes,

Abdelghani
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IELTS letter A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest an interesting part of the city to live in • describe the public transport in your city • say how your friend can meet new people there

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  American English
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167 words
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