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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

Dear Miss Erica, I believe you will be happy to see this letter. I am Priscilla Adams, the lady you helped to recuperate from an accident which occurred two weeks ago at the junction opposite your house. I’m writing to express my profound gratitude for everything you did for me to recuperate after that accident which nearly costed my life. I sincerely appreciate your effort in various aspects from my hospitalization to recovery even though I was a stranger. I will forever be grateful to your humanitarian actions. I want to take this opportunity to invite you and your family over to my house for dinner this coming Sunday. I know of your busy schedules but please try and honor this invitation since it will be a great chance to also meet my family as well. My house is situated on the Green street opposite the Body Boutique nonetheless, give me a call when you reach the street. I will be waiting for your response. Thank you. Best wishes, Priscilla Adams.
Dear Miss Erica,

I believe you will be happy to
see
this letter. I am Priscilla Adams, the lady you
helped
to recuperate from an accident which occurred two weeks ago at the junction opposite your
house
. I’m writing to express my profound gratitude for everything you did for me to recuperate after that accident which
nearly
costed my life.

I
sincerely
appreciate your effort in various aspects from my hospitalization to recovery
even though
I was a stranger. I will forever be grateful to your humanitarian actions.

I want to take this opportunity to invite you and your family over to my
house
for dinner this coming Sunday. I know of your busy schedules
but
please
try and honor this invitation since it will be a great chance to
also
meet
my family
as well
.

My
house
is situated
on the Green street opposite the Body Boutique nonetheless, give me a call when you reach the street.

I will be waiting for your response. Thank you.

Best wishes,

Priscilla Adams.
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IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

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  American English
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6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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