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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time in summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear Dhakshan, How are you? I hope you’re doing very well. I am writing this letter to you, Since you asked for my suggestion on a camping holiday which you don’t have an idea. My opinion is, you should go for this definetly. I know you’re very much occupied with your current course, I remember we met long ago after that we couldn’t get chance to meet eachother, Since you’re committed with your study, you will really enjoy this vacation with your friends, it will get refreshment to your everyday life. Mainly I want to share my experience with you which I had in my last camping trip. I forgot to bring sleeping bag and my odomos cream Because we can't predict the weather and location So better bought these things with, these are the only problem during this vacation. I can’t wait to go with you on camping holiday. I am eagerly waiting for the summer. We will have great time in future. Enjoy your Vacation, See you Soon My friend. Yours lovingly Porkodi R
Dear Dhakshan,

How are you? I hope you’re doing
very
well. I am writing this letter to you, Since you
asked for
my suggestion on a camping holiday which you don’t have an
idea
. My opinion is, you should go for this
definetly
.

I know you’re
very
much occupied with your
current
course, I remember we met long ago after that we couldn’t
get
chance to
meet
eachother, Since you’re committed with your study, you will
really
enjoy this vacation with your friends, it will
get
refreshment to your everyday life.

Mainly
I want to share my experience with you which I had in my last camping trip. I forgot to bring sleeping bag and my odomos cream
Because
we can't predict the weather and location
So
better
bought
these things with, these are the
only
problem during this vacation.

I can’t wait to
go with
you on camping holiday. I am
eagerly
waiting for the summer. We will have great time in future.

Enjoy your Vacation,
See
you
Soon
My friend.

Yours
lovingly


Porkodi R
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time in summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you like to go camping with your friend this summer

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
175 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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