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You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the town council. In your letter, do the following: say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it.

Dear Sir /Madame I am writing to you regfards the news i heard recently in local Newspaper, which concern the creation of a new shopping center in the hilton streetn where i m living currently I have been living in this bneautiful city since i was born, i spend all my life here, and i have the intention to stay here until the last day of my life, this is how much i love this city. as a citisant, i always support the positive develepement and the effort made by the town center in order to satisfay the whole popolation. However, i cant stop myself from wondering about the impact of building such a center in this rural area. as you know, the conjection has been always a huge problem, specialy with the rise of the population in the last years. Besides, the location, was planned for the new parc, in order to give the city a new source of oxygene. it wold be really nice of you if you could give me some details about the exact location in order to ease my concerns and specifique information the whole duration of this project. Yours faithfully. ikima ika
Dear Sir /Madame

I am writing to you regfards the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
i heard recently in local Newspaper, which concern the creation of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
shopping center in the hilton streetn where i m living
currently


I have been living in this bneautiful city since i
was born
, i spend all my life here, and i have the intention to stay here until the last day of my life, this is how much i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
this city.

as a citisant, i always support the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
develepement and the effort made by the town center in order to satisfay the whole popolation.

However
, i cant
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
myself from wondering about the impact of building such a center in this rural area. as you know, the conjection has been always a huge problem,
specialy
with the rise of the population in the last years.
Besides
, the location,
was planned
for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
parc, in order to give the city a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
source of oxygene.

it wold be
really
nice of you if you could give me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
about the exact location in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ease
my concerns and specifique information the whole duration of this project.

Yours
faithfully
.

ikima ika

IELTS letter You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the town council. In your letter, do the following: say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it.

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  American English
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197 words
6.0
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