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You recently learnt that the best teacher you ever had will be retiring soon. Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letter .explain how you heard about his/her retirement .Describe what made him/her such a great teacher .say how your teacher affected your life.

Dear Mr. Appiah, I am writing you this letter in response to the news concerning your retirement. This is Priscilla Smith your outstanding student in government 2007 batch. Actually, the news was displayed on my year group's Facebook page as a results please accept my congratulatory message for a fantastic work done in the school. There are a number of things that made you a great teacher amongst others. Your attitude and response toward teaching was exceptional and I believe it hasn't changed. Every student was treated equally on the contrary, substandard students were given extra attention in your class. In fact, the impact you made in my life is tremendous. You taught me to thrive hard in pursuing my ambitions even if there are hinderances. Currently, I'm influencing my profession positively. Congratulations once again for a wonderful work done over the years. Thank you. Yours Sincerely, Priscilla Smith.
Dear Mr. Appiah, I am writing you this letter in response to the news concerning your retirement. This is Priscilla Smith your outstanding student in
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government
2007 batch. Actually, the news
was displayed
on my year group's Facebook page as a results
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
accept my congratulatory message for a fantastic work done in the school.

There are a number of things that made you a great teacher amongst others. Your attitude and response toward teaching was exceptional and I believe it hasn't
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
. Every student
was treated
equally
on the contrary
, substandard students were
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
extra attention in your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
.

In fact, the impact you made in my life is tremendous. You taught me to thrive
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
in pursuing my ambitions even if there are hinderances.
Currently
, I'm influencing my profession
positively
. Congratulations once again for a wonderful work done over the years. Thank you. Yours
Sincerely
, Priscilla Smith.

IELTS letter You recently learnt that the best teacher you ever had will be retiring soon. Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letter. explain how you heard about his/her retirement. Describe what made him/her such a great teacher. say how your teacher affected your life.

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