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write an letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you need this job

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in response to your advertisement, published last week in one of leading family Australian magazine. You are looking for someone who can live with your family while taking care of your six- year old child. I am a resident of India. My children are studying in Canada and husband recently got transferred to Singapore. Since I am living alone and have experience in child care, I would like to apply for the job. I have worked in child care centre for five years and gained experience in taking care of four to eight year aged kids. I left job after my marriage to take care of my own children. I am skilled in engaging children in absence of parents. I am capable to follow guardian instructions for children’s food. Moreover, I am a certified first aid giver. I would say, my relevance experience in child care make me most eligible candidate to be considered for the job. Recently, my cousin sister has moved to your city. In my spare time, I can go to her place and spend time with her family. In this way I will enjoy my spare time without being burden on you. If you have any questions, please feel free to mail me at abc@gmail. com or call at 7401274 Looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Vijay Luxmi

Dear Sir/Madam,

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live
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 of four to eight year aged kids. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
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care
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make
 me most eligible candidate to be considered
 for the job.

Recently, my cousin sister has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to your city. In my spare time, I can go to her place and spend time with her family. In this way I will enjoy my spare time without being burden on you.

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please
 feel free to mail me at Possible spelling mistake found.Abigail
abc@gmail
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Com
com
 or call at 7401274

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely
,

Vijay Possible spelling mistake found.Lux mi
Luxmi