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You recently bought a new refrigerator from the shop. But after two days it started work wrong

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to complain about the refrigerator which I bought from your shop. On the second of May I visited one of your local shops in order to buy a refrigerator for my own home. Looking around the shop I encountered expected item and I asked a shop assistant about it. After getting all information I decided to purchase it. Two days later things started to go wrong. When I used the refrigerator for the first time it worked properly and products kept cool and fresh. However, next day when I opened the door of refrigerator it was warm inside it and some dairies were spoiled. In addition to this the refrigerator gave very much noise when its work. I would like you to replace the refrigerator with well functioning one. I expect to receive the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise, unfortunately, I will be forced to report this to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Yours faithfully, Ben Thompson
Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to complain about the
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refrigerator
which I
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bought
from your
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shop
. On the second of May I visited one of your local
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shops
in order to
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buy
a
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refrigerator
for my
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own
home. Looking around the
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shop
I encountered
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expected
item and I asked a
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shop
assistant about it.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
getting all information I decided to
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purchase
it. Two days later things
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started
to go
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wrong
. When I
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used
the
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refrigerator
for the
first
time it worked
properly
and products
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kept
cool and fresh.
However
,
next
day when I opened the door of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
refrigerator
it was warm inside it and
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some
dairies
were spoiled
.
In addition
to this the
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refrigerator
gave
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very
much noise when its work. I would like you to replace the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
refrigerator
with well functioning one. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
to receive the same type of unit and brand.
Otherwise
, unfortunately, I will
be forced
to report this to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Yours
faithfully
, Ben
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Thompson
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IELTS letter You recently bought a new refrigerator from the shop. But after two days it started work wrong

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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