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You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter -introduce yourself -say why you are interested in this sports club -ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs

You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter -introduce yourself -say why you are interested in this sports club -ask some questions about the club e. g. facilities, members, costs MoN7Q

Dear Sir/Madam, I am Tiff from Cofer college, I am starting an Import & Export Business course and I really satisfied with the teaching way of this college. Unfortunately, they do not have a sport club which I extremely love joining it. Hence, I am writing to ask if you would be please to give me some more detailed information to register your sport club. I must acknowledge that your club immensely impresses me as I was acidentally passed by there because it is enormous club with manifold modern facilities and especially nearby my college which is no sport club for me to practice. Thus, I urge myself to join your club where is really convenience to me. Doing exercise is considered the key to develop both physical health and mentally health, that is why I have been interested in take part in any sports and i always secure a standard club like yours. Nevertheless, i am quite curious about how to register a name? How much money does your course costs? Does your club has a rest room? If so, please tell me the extra price of using it. The last is how many people are there in your club? Therefore, could you pleasure responding me as soon as possible. I am hoping that you will assist me when I am in the part of your sport club. I look forward to hearing from you as earliest. Thank you so much! Yours faithfully Tiffany

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Yours faithfully


Tiffany