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About myself and studying english important.

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Hello im jannur im 16years old I've been studying english for so long. And I want to improve my skills better than now. So I will take IELTS exam easier. And get a good score. If I get a good score I will be able to study abroad. That one of my wish is study abroad especially in Korea. That is one of my dream. Nowadays English is the most important language to study. If you have english that takes you everywhere you want just you have to be more intelligent.
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IELTS letter About myself and studying english important.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
91 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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