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Letter to change accommodation in the college

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ToThe Accommodation officerSt Joseph collegeDear sir/madamI would like to inform you regarding the problems with my accomodation in our college. Iam living in a shared room with one of my college mate. Her friends do visit here frequently and play musics in high volume over the night. So I could not sleep and not able to study. Hence I request you to kindly change my accommodation in order to get concentrate on my studies. Thanking you

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 I could not sleep and not able to study. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
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IELTS letter Letter to change accommodation in the college

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

75 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Fully explain these ideas
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