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1. You bought a pair of trousers online, and found them as counterfeit product later. Write a complaint to the ecommerce company In your letter • Introduce yourself • Describe what went wrong with the product • Tell what you want the ecommerce company to do and your action plan

1. You bought a pair of trousers online, and found them as counterfeit product later. Write a complaint to the ecommerce company In your letter • Introduce yourself • Describe what went wrong with the product • Tell what you want the ecommerce company to do and your action plan WymOa
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complain against your organization for delivering wrong and faulty product to me. I am Tapan Soni and I bought trouser of Nike brand on last flash sale via order acknowledge number 24AGF24596742 and delivered at Naranpura, Ahmedabad. I had a need to trouser and I come to know that on myntra portal there is wide range of varieties for trousers available. So I have decided to go for it. Supposedly, at the time of delivery I have found that the wrong size and color has been delivered. I have ask for 38 size in XG product code and blue color as that is my favorite one. Your company has delivered 44 size in same product code but red color. As per the terms and condition of order, I can return this material within 7 days so I am doing that procedure. This type of mistakes from a company like yours is not acceptable at all. In Online business righty and timely delivery is the essence of the order. For cross-check at you end please adds another tier of inspection so this should not happen in the future. Waiting for the prompt and positive response in this regards. Yours Faithfully, Tapan Soni
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to complain against your organization for delivering
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wrong
and faulty product to me. I am
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Tapan
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Soni
and I
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bought
trouser of Nike brand on last flash sale via order acknowledge number 24AGF24596742 and delivered at
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Naranpura
, Ahmedabad.

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I
had a need to trouser and I
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come
to know that on
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myntra
portal there is wide range of varieties for trousers available.
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So
I have decided to go for it.
Supposedly
, at the time of delivery I have found that the
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wrong
size and color has
been delivered
. I have
Use past participle here: "asked".
ask
for 38 size in
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XG
product code and blue color as
that is
my favorite one. Your
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company
has delivered 44 size in same product code
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but
red color.

As per the terms and condition of order, I can return this material within 7 days
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so
I am doing that procedure. This type of mistakes from a
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company
like yours is not acceptable at all. In Online business
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righty
and timely delivery is the essence of the order. For cross-
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check
at you
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end
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please
Did you mean "add"?
adds
another tier of inspection
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so
this should not happen in the future.

Waiting for the prompt and
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positive
response in
Did you mean "these"?
this
regards.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Tapan
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Soni
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IELTS letter 1. You bought a pair of trousers online, and found them as counterfeit product later. Write a complaint to the ecommerce company In your letter • Introduce yourself • Describe what went wrong with the product • Tell what you want the ecommerce company to do and your action plan

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
206 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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