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You are an international student and have borrowed a book from the local public library. You left the book on a bus and when you contacted the bus company, they could not find it. Write a letter to the librarian explaining the situation and asking what you should do.

You are an international student and have borrowed a book from the local public library. You left the book on a bus and when you contacted the bus company, they could not find it. Write a letter to the librarian explaining the situation and asking what you should do. jNoy
Dear Sir / Madam, I am currently pursuing master in computer science at Harvard University. I am writing this letter to inform you about lost of new edition of C Programming Language book, which i borrowed from your library on 25th January for the period of 6 days. Yesterday, I was travelling from my university to home after attending extra class. It was late in the evening and the bus which I caught to travel, was full of passengers. When the bus dropped me at my destination, I noticed that my handy bag was not with me. My another two books along with the hired book were also in that bag. After realizing this incident, immediately I called the bus authority and explained this matter. They tried their best to search my missed bag on my up on request but unfortunately they failed to find out the bag. To fulfill my responsibility of returning the borrowed item on the given time frame, I am seeking your valuable advice in this regard. Either should I buy a new one and will return within few days or I am ready to pay the fine as per library's rule and regulations. I would be grateful if you could advice me to solve this situation. Yours faithfully, David Zane
Dear Sir / Madam,

I am
currently
pursuing master in computer science at Harvard University. I am writing this letter to inform you about lost of new edition of C Programming Language book, which
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
borrowed from your library on 25th January for the period of 6 days.

Yesterday, I was travelling from my university to home after attending extra
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
. It was late in the evening and the bus which I caught to travel, was full of passengers. When the bus dropped me at my destination, I noticed that my handy bag was not with me. My another two books along with the hired book were
also
in that bag. After realizing this incident, immediately I called the bus authority and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explained
this matter. They tried their best to search my missed bag on my up on request
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
unfortunately they failed to find out the bag.

To fulfill my responsibility of returning the borrowed item on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
time frame, I am seeking your valuable advice in this regard. Either should I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
a new one and will return within few
Use a comma before 'or' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
days or
I am ready to pay the fine as per library's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rule
and regulations.

I would be grateful if you could
The word 'advise' is a noun. Did you mean "advise" (verb)?
advice
me to solve this situation.

Yours
faithfully
,

David Zane
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IELTS letter You are an international student and have borrowed a book from the local public library. You left the book on a bus and when you contacted the bus company, they could not find it. Write a letter to the librarian explaining the situation and asking what you should do.

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