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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you We5K
Hi Iqbal, This is to assure you that I reached my home safely. I thought to express my feelings and thank you for how I have enjoyed the past week since It has been a long time, we have planned such memorable holidays. I am sure we will enjoy such moments again and this time with our families as well. After arriving at home, I found that I have left the wallet somewhere in the journey but the next moment I realized that it was left on the dressing at your home. There are some important cards that I usually use for buying grocery and also my company ID card, driving license which are deemed necessary for me to carry along when I go out. For your ease, I would suggest to send it through courier service in an enclosed envelope marked as confidential. This will save my belongings and bound the delivery man to handle it with care. I would be thankful if you deliver it in a day through fast service offer. Thank you again for the holidays arrangement and taking care of my documents. Yours sincerely, Muhammad Muzammil
Hi Iqbal,

This is to assure you that I reached my home
safely
. I
thought
to express my feelings and thank you for how I have enjoyed the past week since It has been a long time, we have planned such memorable holidays. I am sure we will enjoy such moments again and this time with our families
as well
.

After arriving at home, I found that I have
left
the wallet somewhere in the journey
but
the
next
moment I realized that it was
left
on the dressing at your home. There are
some
important
cards that I
usually
use
for buying grocery and
also
my
company
ID card, driving license which
are deemed
necessary for me to carry along when I go out.

For your
ease
, I would suggest to
send
it through courier service in an enclosed envelope marked as confidential. This will save my belongings and bound the delivery
man
to handle it with care. I would be thankful if you deliver it in a day through
fast
service offer.

Thank you again for the holidays arrangement and taking care of my documents.

Yours
sincerely
,

Muhammad
Muzammil
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IELTS letter You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you

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  American English
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190 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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