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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview 0Lqn
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to apply for the job opening for a waitress in your respected / reputed restaurant. I came across this opportunity in today’s newspaper and believe that my experience aligns with the requirements of this role. Let me explain my situation in more detail. Currently, I am working as a Kitchen Hand at The Lotus in Ultimo. I have been working here for the past 2 years and help the Chef by performing duties like serving customers and cleaning the restaurant. With my extensive in the hospitality industry I have amazed by manager with my ability to carry 5-6 plates at once and thus appreciated my pace of serving the customers. I am sure this will be beneficial during busy periods. I will be available for an interview at all times from Tuesday-Friday. I will be more than happy to cooperate during any other times, if these times conflict with your schedule. I look forward to a positive response from your end. Yours sincerely, Rashi Khindri
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing to apply for the job opening for a waitress in your respected / reputed restaurant. I came across this opportunity in
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today
’s newspaper and believe that my experience aligns with the requirements of this role.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation in more detail.
Currently
, I am working as a Kitchen Hand at The Lotus in Ultimo. I have been working here for the past 2 years and
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help
the Chef by performing duties like serving customers and cleaning the restaurant.

With my extensive in the hospitality industry I have amazed by manager with my ability to carry 5-6 plates at once and
thus
appreciated my pace of serving the customers. I am sure this will be beneficial during busy periods.

I will be available for an interview at all times from Tuesday-Friday.
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I
will be more than happy to cooperate during any other times, if these times conflict with your schedule.

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I
look forward to a
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positive
response from your
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end
.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Rashi
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Khindri

IELTS letter A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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