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You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events’ organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser expressing your interest in the role requesting more information about it explaining what experience you have

You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events’ organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser expressing your interest in the role requesting more information about it explaining what experience you have Ggkw
Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing this letter to show my interest in becoming the social event organizer in the training programme. I was the event head of the festival program during my undergraduate study. In my final year, I volunteer for the event head of one of the biggest festivals in the college. It involved range of functions and games such as running, painting, dancing, acting etc. ; moreover, as a head of the fest, I did not only manage the budget of the fest but also the sub-head of the individual event. Furthermore, we hired a team of experts to make the unbiased decision on all occasion because our college had been penalized for wrong decisions in the previous cultural fest. Adding onto it, our team won the best organizer of the cultural festival in the entire university competition. Could you please share more details about the program? As I have all require skills to handle the range of programs, I would love to participate and provide all hands to successfully organized the planed event. Looking forward to hear from you. Your faithfully, Bhavesh
Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing this letter to
show
my interest in becoming the social
event
organizer in the training
programme
. I was the
event
head of the festival program during my undergraduate study.

In my final year, I volunteer for the
event
head of one of the biggest festivals in the college. It involved range of functions and games such as running, painting, dancing, acting etc. ;
moreover
, as a head of the fest, I did not
only
manage the budget of the fest
but
also
the sub-head of the individual
event
.
Furthermore
, we hired a team of experts to
make
the unbiased decision on all occasion
because
our college had
been penalized
for
wrong
decisions in the previous cultural fest. Adding onto it, our team won the best organizer of the cultural festival in the entire university competition.

Could you
please
share more
details
about the program? As I have all require
skills
to handle the range of programs, I would
love
to participate and provide all hands to
successfully
organized the planed
event
.

Looking forward
to hear
from you.

Your
faithfully
,

Bhavesh
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IELTS letter You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events’ organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser expressing your interest in the role requesting more information about it explaining what experience you have

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