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you recently lost your driving licence and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her. How important the licence is to you Asking how he/she found it Saying how you would love to thank him/her.

you recently lost your driving licence and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her. How important the licence is to you Asking how he/she found it Saying how you would love to thank him/her. 7DR3
Dear Mr. Jones, I am writing to thank you for sending me back my lost driving license. You cannot imagine how much you helped me. My family and I are going to Queenstown for a five-day holiday next week, and I have booked a van during that time. If you did not find my driving license, I would not be able to pick up the van by then, and my whole vacation would be ruined, or even worse, my wife would be blaming me for at least one month. May I ask where you found the driving license? I remember the last time I saw it was when I was shopping in Sylvia Park. I took it out with my bank card when I checked out. I guess I lost it at that time. To express my heartfelt gratitude, I would love to invite you to dinner after I return from the trip. I have a feeling that we can be good friends. Thanks again, and best wishes to you. Tom Smith
Dear Mr. Jones,

I am writing to thank you for sending me back my lost driving license. You cannot imagine how much you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me.

My family and I are going to Queenstown for a five-day holiday
next
week, and I have booked a van during that time. If you did not find my driving license, I would not be able to pick up the van by then, and my whole vacation would
be ruined
, or even worse, my wife would be blaming me for at least one month.

May I ask where you found the driving license? I remember the last time I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
it was when I was shopping in Sylvia Park. I took it out with my bank card when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
checked
out.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
guess I lost it at that time.

To express my heartfelt gratitude, I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to invite you to dinner after I return from the trip. I have a feeling that we can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
friends.

Thanks again, and best wishes to you.

Tom Smith
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IELTS letter you recently lost your driving licence and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her. How important the licence is to you Asking how he/she found it Saying how you would love to thank him/her.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
171 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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