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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the keyboard that I purchased from your branch in Paris street, last week on 3rd of June. From the very beginning that I used the keyboard for fast typing, I noticed that some keys are stiff and need to be pressed hard to work properly. I unplugged the keyboard from my desktop several times and shook it, following online suggestions to fix keyboard issues, but some keys were not responding to quick touch, and the problem was not solved. As a freelancer, mainly responsible for translating and typing documents, this issue with your product has caused me great inconvenience. I need to concentrate on the process of translation; however, I have to check my work repeatedly to make sure there are no spelling mistakes. Moreover, I should pass keys longer and it stops me from fast typing and leads to an immense waste of time. I would really appreciate it if you could replace the item free of charge, as it is still under warranty. Please ensure that the problem is treated as a priority by your customer service department because it is putting my job at risk. Await your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Aifa Daneshmand

Dear Sir or Madam,

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keyboard
 that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 from your branch in Paris street, last week on 3rd of June.

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very
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used
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keyboard
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fast
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some
 keys are stiff and need to be pressed
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hard
 to work properly
. I unplugged the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanualpianoconsole
keyboard
 from my desktop several times and shook it, following online suggestions to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
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keyboard
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but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 keys were not responding to quick touch, and the problem was not solved.

As a freelancer, mainly
 responsible for translating and typing documents, this issue with your product has caused me great inconvenience. I need to concentrate on the process of translation; however
, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 my work repeatedly
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sure there are no spelling mistakes. Moreover
, I should pass keys longer and it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasesdiscontinues
stops
 me from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 typing and leads to an immense waste of time.

I would really
 appreciate it if you could replace the item free of charge, as it is still
 under warranty. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 ensure that the problem is treated
 as a priority by your customer service department This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is putting my job at This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
.

Await your prompt response.

Yours faithfully
,

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