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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take ByW6
Dear Smith, I'm Namitha Johnson, who resides in your appartment 30 Malta Avenue. Hope you are doing good. The reason for writing this letter is because I'm left disappointed about the utensils of the apartment, especially the furnitures. When you lent this home to us you told that all the appliances are brand new and if anything happens we can contact you. For the last two weeks me, myself tried lot of time reaching out to you but was unable to get any response, even I tried to contact your office, but nobody was available there. Let me explain my situation, yesterday the situation got even wrose. Our dinning table's leg got broken and it fell down. It was so scary because my 2 year old always use to walk arround that area. However by God's grace she was not there at the time. I don't want to take any more risk in the coming days. So I kindly request you to send a carpenter to our house as soon as possible to fix these issues. Hope you got the seriousness of the issue. Your's faithfully Namitha
Dear Smith,

I'm
Namitha
Johnson, who resides in your
appartment
30 Malta Avenue.

Hope you are doing
good
. The reason for writing this letter is
because
I'm
left
disappointed about the utensils of the apartment,
especially
the
furnitures
. When you lent this home to us you
told
that all the appliances are brand new and if anything happens we can contact you. For the last two weeks me, myself tried
lot of
time reaching out to you
but
was unable to
get
any response, even I tried to contact your office,
but
nobody was available there.

Let
me
explain
my situation, yesterday the situation
got
even
wrose
. Our dinning table's leg
got
broken and it fell down. It was
so
scary
because
my
2 year
old
always
use to
walk
arround
that area.
However
by God's grace she was not there at the time. I don't want to take any more
risk
in the coming days.
So
I kindly request you to
send
a carpenter to our
house
as
soon
as possible to
fix
these issues. Hope you
got
the seriousness of the issue.

Your's
faithfully


Namitha
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IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
186 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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