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Bought machine for kitchen with problems no help manager

Bought machine for kitchen with problems no help manager wpm3
Dear Sir and Madame: This well-considered letter is to bring your attention to the horrific experience with my latest purchase, a brand new mixer at your store last week. I was very excited to get the BM500 mixer thanks to the amazing reviews I have seen from my research. Although the payment and delivery process was such a breeze, the shipment came with a little damage on the side of the box. When I was going through the set-up stage, the machine worked fine with the lowest speed. However, it was impossible to switch it to a higher speed. Regardless of the time and effort I spent following the user’s manual instructions, I could only turn it on with one mode of operation. As soon as I stumbled on the problem, I made a call to your assistant phone line, looking for some help. While the gentleman over the phone was very nice and patient to talk to, he provided me little to no help in fixing the issue. All the information he provided was already there in the manual and such level of service made me question myself about choosing your store for further purchases. I have been a very loyal customer of your store since I moved to this city, and I am very disappointed with the poor assistance I have experienced. I think as a manager, there are many options for you to fix my problems, but I would like to ask if you could so kindly arrange an in-person device check-up for my newly bought mixer. I really like this model so in case if your experts could not fix it on the appointment, would it be possible to provide me with a new unit? Please seriously consider my complaint for immediate actions to be taken. Kind regards, Thien An Huynh
Dear Sir and Madame:

This well-considered letter is to bring your attention to the horrific experience with my latest
purchase
, a
brand new
mixer at your store
last week
.

I was
very
excited to
get
the BM500 mixer thanks to the amazing reviews I have
seen
from my research. Although the payment and delivery process was such a breeze, the shipment came with a
little
damage on the side of the box. When I was going through the set-up stage, the machine worked fine with the lowest speed.
However
, it was impossible to switch it to a higher speed. Regardless of the time and effort I spent following the user’s manual instructions, I could
only
turn it on with one mode of operation.

As
soon
as I stumbled on the problem, I made a call to your assistant phone line, looking for
some
help
. While the gentleman over the phone was
very
nice and patient to talk to, he provided me
little
to no
help
in fixing the issue. All the information he provided was already there in the manual and such level of service made me question myself about choosing your store for
further
purchases
.

I have been a
very
loyal customer of your store since I
moved
to this city, and I am
very
disappointed with the poor assistance I have experienced. I
think
as a manager, there are
many
options for you to
fix
my problems,
but
I would like to ask if you could
so
kindly arrange an in-person device
check
-up for my
newly
bought
mixer.
I
really
like this model
so
in case if your experts could not
fix
it on the appointment, would it be possible to provide me with a new unit?

Please
seriously
consider my complaint for immediate actions to
be taken
.

Kind regards,

Thien
An
Huynh
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IELTS letter Bought machine for kitchen with problems no help manager

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