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You brought mobile phone from wallmart store recently it is no longer working properly write a letter to the manager

You brought mobile phone from wallmart store recently it is no longer working properly write a letter to the manager 3AE7X

I am writing to inform you about the faulty mobile phone that i have purchased in your store. I am rutika chaudhari i am a regular customer of your store. on the 31st may, i bought a brand new one plus 8 mobile. I elaborate whole situation about phone. your store representative told me this phone’s battery has two day longer without charging. But it has a poor battery life. And other major issue that when i try to download applications from App. Store. it does not responding and i can not download application. So most of my work is pending without proper accessories. This product is under warranty period. i would like to get a repair because this purchase was a brand new one. please let me know what are the required protocol needed for the same. I am sending the item with this letter, And the bill as well. waiting for your response.

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purchased
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on
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bought
 a brand new one plus 8 mobile. I elaborate whole situation about phone. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYour
your
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store
 representative This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me this phone’s battery has two day longer without charging. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 it has a poor battery life. And other major issue that when Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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Store
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
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responding
 and Did you mean "I"?I
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 can not download application. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 most of my work is pending without proper accessories. This product is under warranty period. Did you mean "I"?I
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get
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because
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purchase
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brand new
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please
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let
 me know what are the required protocol needed for the same. I am sending the item with this letter, And the bill as well
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWaiting
waiting
 for your response. 