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Letter to a friend sharing news of your country

Dear James, I remember the last time we met in my hometown when you arrived here for a tour of my country, Pakistan, and your remarks are cherishing vowing that my state is in a progressive phase towards peace. There is another news I would like to share with you about the revival of the textile sector in my country. For the past couple of years, nearly a decade the textile sector was declining as increasing terrorism, rising electricity prices, and currency devaluation affected them badly. But in recent days, with progressive policies introduced by the current government, the sector is emerging and flourishing again. Pakistan is primarily an agricultural country where more than 60% of people are associated with crops and clothing business. Moreover, it's a chief contributor to exports from Pakistan. My family relatives are in the jeans clothing business, and they were worried about the situation but are making well earning through it nowadays. It's significant that in this industry our country is facing a shortfall of employees of around 200 thousand workers. In the end, I would like to invite you again to revisit my country in the upcoming summer holidays. We will go hiking in the mountains of Murree and visit Kashmir, one of the most beautiful places in the world such that travelers called it Paradise on earth. Regards, Your Friend. Muhammad Musawwir

Dear James,

I remember the last time we met in my hometown when you arrived here for a tour of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
, Pakistan, and your remarks are cherishing vowing that my state is in a progressive phase towards peace. There is another news I would like to share with you about the revival of the textile sector in my country.

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affected
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But
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current
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government
, the sector is emerging and flourishing again. Pakistan is primarily
 an agricultural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 where more than 60% of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
are associated
 with crops and clothing business.

Moreover
, it's a chief contributor to exports from Pakistan. My family relatives are in the jeans clothing business, and they were worried
 about the situation This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 are making well earning through it nowadays. It's significant that in this industry our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 is facing a shortfall of employees of around 200 thousand workers.

In the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, I would like to invite you again to revisit my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 in the upcoming summer holidays. We will go hiking in the mountains of Murree and visit Kashmir, one of the most This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 places in the world such that travelers called it Paradise on earth.

Regards,

Your Friend.

Muhammad Musawwir