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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to enquire about the Diabetes Management seminar in London. I am Priscilla Osei an employee of Ghana Health Service and I work at Bibiani Municipal Hospital in the Male Medical Department in Ghana. This seminar is therefore very relevant to me as a health worker. I would like to find out about the date this seminar will be organized to enable me make preparation ahead of time. Also I would like to be briefed on the program outline and the facilitators who would take us through the seminar. Since I will be travelling from a different country, I wish to know the accommodation plans that has been put in place for foreigners considering the fact that it is a two days’ seminar if the cost involved as well is made known, it would be greatly appreciated. Please I would be very grateful to participate in the upcoming seminar hence hoping to hear from you. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Priscilla Osei.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to enquire about the Diabetes Management
seminar
in London.

I am Priscilla Osei an employee of Ghana Health Service and I work at Bibiani Municipal Hospital in the Male Medical Department in Ghana. This
seminar
is
therefore
very
relevant to me as a health worker.

I would like to find out about the date this
seminar
will
be organized
to enable me
make
preparation ahead of time.
Also
I would like to
be briefed
on the program outline and the facilitators who would take us through the seminar.

Since I will be travelling from a
different
country, I wish to know the accommodation plans that has
been put
in place for foreigners considering the fact that it is a two days’
seminar
if the cost involved
as well
is made
known, it would be
greatly
appreciated.

Please
I would be
very
grateful to participate in the upcoming
seminar
hence
hoping to hear from you.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Priscilla Osei.
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IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
170 words
6.5
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