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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter: Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. Give details of when you would be available for work.

A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter: Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. Give details of when you would be available for work. bYEd6
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in participating in the renovation work at the City Museum Hall. As we all know, the city museum is a symbol of the country’s ancient glories and also an integral part of our life. I spent my entire childhood playing in the main garden area of this museum. This is truly an opportunity for me to give back for the betterment of this eminent structure. I am a qualified architect with about 10 years of experience in refurbishing old buildings. I can help the museum refurbishment team in relaying the damaged roof of the museum. Moreover, I can assist in designing a new construction layout for the parking space at the main entrance gate. As I have a full time job, I will be available only on weekends. I hope you would consider my request and give me an opportunity to work for this community cause. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Sherina Moktan
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my interest
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in participating in
the renovation work at the City
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Museum
Hall. As we all know, the city
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
is a symbol of the country’s ancient glories and
also
an integral part of our life. I spent my entire childhood playing in the main garden area of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
. This is
truly
an opportunity for me to give back for the betterment of this eminent structure.

I am a qualified architect with about 10 years of experience in refurbishing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
buildings. I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
refurbishment team in relaying the damaged roof of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
.
Moreover
, I can assist in designing a new construction layout for the parking space at the main entrance gate. As I have a full time job, I will be available
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
on weekends.

I hope you would consider my request and give me an opportunity to work for this community cause.

I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Sherina
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Moktan
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IELTS letter A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter: Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. Give details of when you would be available for work.

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