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A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination write a letter to your friend in your letter recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited describe where you stayed and what you can do there provide one negative aspect about destination

A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination write a letter to your friend in your letter recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited describe where you stayed and what you can do there provide one negative aspect about destination jRd6N
Dear jay, Holidays are so much needed after the boring routine life. I wish I could join you though, I am tied up with a whole lot of work but I would highly recommend you to visit goa which I visited last year with some of my high school friends. Well, we stayed at hotel O2 which is 4-star property fitted perfectly with our budget and it’s located in north goa. Dude! property has a private beach, isn’t that the best thing? Also, north goa has a lot of tourist places, nightclubs and a shopping market which is nearby the hotel where we stayed. I would like to tell you the only drawback of this destination is the weather. As soon the summer is heading up and the temperature will be quite high during that time. I wish you happy holidays. Your friend Chandni
Dear jay,

Holidays are
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so
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much needed
after the boring routine life. I wish I could
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join
you though, I
am tied
up with a
Consider using "lot".
whole lot
of work
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but
I would
highly
recommend you to visit
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goa
which I visited last year with
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some
of my high school friends.

Well, we stayed at hotel O2 which is 4-star property fitted
perfectly
with our budget and it’s located in north
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goa
. Dude!
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property
has a private beach, isn’t that the best thing?
Also
, north
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goa
has
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a lot of
tourist places, nightclubs and a shopping market which is nearby the hotel where we stayed.

I would like to
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tell
you the
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only
drawback of this destination is the weather. As
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soon
the summer is heading up and the temperature will be quite high during that time.

I wish you happy holidays.

Your friend

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Chandni
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination write a letter to your friend in your letter recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited describe where you stayed and what you can do there provide one negative aspect about destination

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  American English
7 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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