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A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination write a letter to your friend in your letter recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited describe where you stayed and what you can do there provide one negative aspect about destination

A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination write a letter to your friend in your letter recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited describe where you stayed and what you can do there provide one negative aspect about destination 85Qql
Dear Chandni, It's amazing that you are going on a vacation this summer, and if you want to add some thrill to your holidays I will recommend you to visit Rishikesh. It's a fabulous place to drop by because the weather is in the high 20's, and the wind is very soothing to your face. I had visited the place last year with my friends, and we had a blast! we had a group of four friends, and none of us wanted to book a sumptuous hotel so we decided to stay in a villa which was closer to the Ganga river. One of my friend's dad recommended the villa, and it was much affordable. The villa was located in a hilly area so the view from there was breathtaking. There are a plethora of things to do, for an instance, you can go river rafting, bungee jumping, paragliding, skydiving, and hiking. The only drawback about the Rishikesh is their roads. They are very narrow and congested, and sometimes it is even arduous to walk due to slippery roads. I reckon it's a small price to pay when you get such beautiful scenery and thrilling adventures in one place. I hope you will consider my suggestion before booking your trip. I can't wait to hear from you. Your friend, Jay
Dear
Chandni
,

It's amazing that you are going on a vacation this summer, and if you want to
add
some
thrill to your holidays I will recommend you to visit
Rishikesh
. It's a fabulous place to drop by
because
the weather is in the high
20's
, and the wind is
very
soothing to your face. I had visited the place last year with my friends, and we had a blast!

we
had a group of four friends, and none of us wanted to book a sumptuous hotel
so
we decided to stay in a villa which was closer to the
Ganga
river. One of my friend's dad recommended the villa, and it was much affordable. The villa
was located
in a hilly area
so
the view from there was breathtaking. There are a plethora of things to do, for an instance, you can go river rafting, bungee jumping, paragliding, skydiving, and hiking.

The
only
drawback about the
Rishikesh
is their roads. They are
very
narrow and congested, and
sometimes
it is even arduous to walk due to slippery roads. I reckon it's a
small
price to pay when you
get
such
beautiful
scenery and thrilling adventures in one place. I hope you will consider my suggestion
before
booking your trip.

I
can't wait to hear from you.

Your friend,

Jay
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination write a letter to your friend in your letter recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited describe where you stayed and what you can do there provide one negative aspect about destination

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  American English
7 paragraphs
219 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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