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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter, explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work

A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter, explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work Wyyaq
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in connection with a recent vacancy announcement for voluntary work at your museum. I am interested in getting the job and serve my position with dedication and hard work. Currently, I am a student at Victoria University and pursuing my Master's degree in International Cultural Studies. In the past, I have worked at the Royal BC Museum in a voluntary position for toe months during my summer break in 2019. I have both the practical and academic skills which I believe exactly match with the position announced. I have gained lots of new skills and knowledge about the operation and management of a museum. For instance, I have detailed knowledge about the aboriginal history in BC which I can put to use to explain visitors and answer questions they might have. Also, I am very creative and can bring new ideas to life which can add value to the museum. I am looking forward to meeting you in person for a personal interview. If I am selected, I would be available to start working from the 10th of December 2020. Yours faithfully, Harpreet Singh
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in connection with a recent vacancy announcement for voluntary work at your museum. I
am interested
in getting the job and serve my position with dedication and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
work.

Currently
, I am a student at Victoria University and pursuing my Master's degree in International Cultural Studies. In the past, I have worked at the Royal BC Museum in a voluntary position for toe months during my summer break in 2019. I have both the practical and academic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
which I believe exactly match with the position announced.

I have gained lots of new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and knowledge about the operation and management of a museum.
For instance
, I have detailed knowledge about the aboriginal history in BC which I can put to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
visitors and answer questions they might have.
Also
, I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
creative and can bring new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
to life which can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
value to the museum.

I am looking forward to meeting you in person for a personal interview. If I
am selected
, I would be available to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
working from the 10th of December 2020.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Harpreet
Singh
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IELTS letter A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter, explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work

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7 paragraphs
190 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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