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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part time voluntary unpaid work

A museum near your home is looking for people to do part time voluntary unpaid work RRe1o
Dear sir/madam, I am coressponding this letter with regard that having come to know that you need a part time worker for museum, I am interested in the job so I would like to offer my services free of cost. Let me explain my position as I am student of IT in UHTM university besides I have keen interest in historical items. Moreover I am a good guide and president of art & craft section of uni. I have lots of experience in management and mentainance of old remain in my job besides I will manage all the computer work and labeld the sections properly. I would be available on Monday, Tuesday and Thursday evening from 04. 30 to 07. 00 p. m, as in the evening I am free it would be a marvulase time for me to gain knowledge and enhance my experience whilst help me in future. Hope for a prompt and positive response from you. Your truly, Robert
Dear sir/madam,

I am
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coressponding
this letter with regard that having
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come
to know that you need a
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part time
worker for museum, I
am interested
in the job
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so
I would like to offer my services free of cost.

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Let
me
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explain
my position as I am student of IT in
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UHTM
university
besides
I have keen interest in historical items.
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Moreover
I am a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
guide and president of art & craft section of uni. I have lots of experience in management and
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mentainance
of
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old
remain in my job
besides
I will manage all the computer work and
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labeld
the sections
properly
.

I would be available on Monday, Tuesday and Thursday evening from 04. 30 to 07. 00 p. m, as in the evening I am free it would be a
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marvulase
time for me to gain knowledge and enhance my experience whilst
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help
me
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
.

Hope for a prompt and
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positive
response from you. Your
truly
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Robert

IELTS letter A museum near your home is looking for people to do part time voluntary unpaid work

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
161 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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