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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter: Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. Give details of when you would be available for work.

A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter: Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. Give details of when you would be available for work. MMoAL
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in response to your request for volunteers. I am really keen to do this because I am a history buff and looking for interesting ways to keep myself busy during my retirement years. I believe this would also give me an opportunity to have more involvement in the community. I believe I have a number of skills that will be of value to the museum. First of all, I am an excellent public speaker and I believe this would be useful for seminars or tour groups. As well as this, I’m also computer savvy and able to complete technical tasks. I am available any time during the week. As I am an early bird, any type of hours in the morning or afternoon will suit me. However, I have to look after my grandchildren during weekends, so I am not available. I would appreciate discussing this with you further when time permits. Yours faithfully, Mike Wattie
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in response to your request for volunteers.

I am
really
keen to do this
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I am a history buff and looking for interesting ways to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
myself busy during my retirement years.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
believe this would
also
give me an opportunity to have more involvement in the community.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
believe I have a number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
that will be of value to the museum.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, I am an excellent public speaker and I believe this would be useful for seminars or tour groups.
As well
as this, I’m
also
computer savvy and able to complete technical tasks.

I am available any time during the week. As I am an early bird, any type of hours in the morning or afternoon will suit me.
However
, I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
look after my grandchildren during weekends,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I am not available.

I would appreciate discussing this with you
further
when time permits.

Yours
faithfully
,

Mike
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Wattie
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IELTS letter A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter: Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. Give details of when you would be available for work.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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