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letter of vacation from office to line manager

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Dear Mr. Brown, Due to some personal reasons I require vacations nearly one month from office. Last year I have bought one five marla plot for the construction of my home. Because of low budget I did not start the construction. As you know this year I got a good bonus and also I saved some money, I want to build my home. It is very necessary to build my own home because the rents of homes are going high. For this I want to take 27 days leave from 1st to 27th December. The next week I will work two hours more to finish my assigned tasks on time. If needed I will work on weekend too. Mr. Naseer will see my wrk. I will give the key of my drawer so he can access all the official documents. I will give him my computer password too for any changes. I guide him about all the work. He will manage the work, I hope there will be no issue. Yours Sincerely, Dil
Dear Mr. Brown,

Due to
some
personal reasons I require vacations
nearly
one month from office.

Last year I have
bought
one five
marla
plot for the construction of my home.
Because
of low budget I did not
start
the construction. As you know this year I
got
a
good
bonus and
also
I saved
some
money, I want to build my home. It is
very
necessary to build my
own
home
because
the rents of
homes
are going high. For this I want to take 27 days
leave
from 1st to 27th December.

The
next
week I will
work
two hours more to finish my assigned tasks on time.
If
needed I will
work
on weekend too.

Mr.
Naseer
will
see
my
wrk
. I will give the key of my drawer
so
he can access all the official documents. I will give him my computer password too for any
changes
.
I
guide him about all the
work
. He will manage the
work
, I hope there will be no issue.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Dil
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IELTS letter letter of vacation from office to line manager

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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