Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

A local high school is planning t offer the option of online classes for students who have difficulty commuting to school. The principal of the high school wants to know how community members feel about this idea. Write an email to the principal expressing your own opinion about whether online classes should be offered to these students. Give reasons to support your ideas

A local high school is planning t offer the option of online classes for students who have difficulty commuting to school. The principal of the high school wants to know how community members feel about this idea. Write an email to the principal expressing your own opinion about whether online classes should be offered to these students. Give reasons to support your ideas RknOP

I am a community member and I am writing to express my opinion about online lessons. I do not agree with them, although they have significant advantages. On the one hand, it will benefit students considerably because they will sleep more. For example, they will not wake up early so they can go to school. This will help them relax more and in this way they will not be tired during their lesson and the lesson will become more beneficial. Further more, they will be more confortable at their house. They will be more relaxed and they will not be so stressed. On the other hand, teenagers who study at home will miss the lively atmosphere of the classroom. They will not communicate with their friends, teachers and classmates. As a result, they will become isolated and lonely. In addition, if they are alone at their house they will not develop social skills. For instance, when they grow up they will not be ready and able to work in groups. In conclusion, online classes will not benefit students because they will not be ready to go out to the society. I think that online lessons should not be implemented. Your faithfully,

I am a community Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).member, and
member and
 I am writing to express my opinion about online You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpracticetaskstudyinstructionreadingteaching
lessons
. I do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with them, although they have significant advantages.

On the one hand, it will benefit students considerably
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they will sleep more. For example
, they will not wake up early This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they can go to school. This will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 them relax more and in this way they will not be tired
 during their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpracticetaskstudyinstructionreadingteaching
lesson
 and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpracticetaskstudyinstructionreadingteaching
lesson
 will become more beneficial. Further
 more, they will be more Possible spelling mistake found.comfortableconformable
confortable
 at their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. They will be more Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).relaxed, and
relaxed and
 they will not be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuated
stressed
.

On the other hand
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
 who study at home will miss the lively atmosphere of the classroom. They will not communicate with their friends, teachers and classmates. As a result
, they will become isolated and lonely. In addition
, if they are alone at their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 they will not develop social This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
. For instance
, when they grow up they will not be ready and able to work in groups.

In conclusion
, online classes will not benefit students This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they will not be ready to go out to the society. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that online You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpracticetaskstudyinstructionreadingteaching
lessons
 should not be implemented
.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
faithfully
, 