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A letter to take care of my pet and household duties while I am on a trip

A letter to take care of my pet and household duties while I am on a trip kbdJn

Dear Samantha, I hope you're doing well I wanted to give you all the details and contact details before I go to my short trip with my family from 26th August 2021 to 3rd September 2021. I have a cat, called Jane. I would like to give you some instructions about how to care for my pet Jane on my absence she have to be fed twice a day and she takes a shower after going for a walk at 7 p. m. and sometimes she gets grumpy that means she wants to play with her toys in her room which are in the second drawer, before going to bed she drinks milk in her favourite bowl which is the one with her name on it. The household duties daily are opening the back doors for fresh air, vacuuming Jane’s room because there is a lot of fur all around her room please open the attic window everyday and close it at 5pm. Best regards Kim

Dear Samantha,

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details
 and contact This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
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before
 I go to my short trip with my family from 26th August 2021 to 3rd September 2021. I have a cat, called Jane.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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some
 instructions about how to care for my pet Jane on my absence she The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "has", "had".hashad
have
 to be fed
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day and
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sometimes
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gets
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before
 going to bed she drinks milk in her Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.favorite
favourite
 bowl which is the one with her name on it.

The household duties daily are opening the back doors for fresh air, vacuuming Jane’s room This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 there is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 fur all around her room This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 open the attic window 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?every day
everyday
 and close it at 5pm.

Best regards

Kim