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A letter to a friend regarding a new job.

A letter to a friend regarding a new job. Mm8lq
Dear John I hope that you're doing well. I'm writing this to tell you a piece of happy news. I've got the job of project manager in a start-up firm located in Kochi. I'd like to tell you about the reason behind my job change. I was really unhappy in doing my earlier job mainly due to its hectic schedule. I couldn't do anything other than the job. At present, I'm very happy. My new job provides me ample of new opportunities to grow professionally. Along with that, I get a lot of free time. I'm writing this to tell you about another important thing too, it's about my marriage. I found my soulmate in my new company. Our marriage will take place in December this year. You must come along with your family. All the best Cheers Arun
Dear John

I hope that you're doing well. I'm writing this to
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tell
you a piece of happy
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news
.
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I
've
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got
the
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job
of project manager in a
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start
-up firm located in
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Kochi
.

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I
'd like to
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tell
you about the reason behind my
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job
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change
.
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I
was
really
unhappy in doing my earlier
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job
mainly
due to its hectic schedule.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
couldn't do anything other than the job.

At present, I'm
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very
happy. My
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new
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job
provides me ample of
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new
opportunities to grow
professionally
. Along with that, I
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get
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a lot of
free time.

I'm writing this to
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tell
you about another
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important
thing too, it's about my marriage. I found my soulmate in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
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company
. Our marriage will take place in December this year. You
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must
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come
along with your family.

All the best

Cheers

Arun
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IELTS letter A letter to a friend regarding a new job.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
138 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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