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A letter of request to a friend in London

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Dear Ann, Hope you are doing great! I am writing this letter to enquire about my traveling to London. I am going to visit London shortly and I believe you are the person who l am looking for. As I have never been to London before, I hope you have a little time to introduce me to the city. My reason for journeying is because I will have an important meeting on my business. Despite a short period the products we produce are promoted and attracted the interest of our foreign colleagues and we are invited to a two-day exhibition held in one of the commercial centers of London. I aspire to find a common understanding with our new friends and achieve signing an important contract which we need. I would be grateful if you could acquaint me with the sightseeings of historical England. As my time is limited three or four hours would be ideal if that is possible. I hope you answer me mutually. All the best, Monica.
Dear Ann, Hope you are doing great! I am writing this letter to
enquire
about my traveling to London.

I am going to visit London shortly and I believe you are the person who l
am
looking for. As I have never been to London
before
, I hope you have a
little
time to introduce me to the city.

My reason for journeying is
because
I will have an
important
meeting on my business. Despite a short period the products we produce
are promoted
and attracted the interest of our foreign
colleagues and
we
are invited
to a two-day exhibition held in one of the commercial centers of London. I aspire to find a common understanding with our new friends and achieve signing an
important
contract which we need.

I would be grateful if you could acquaint me with the
sightseeings
of historical England. As my time
is limited
three or four hours would be ideal if
that is
possible.

I hope you answer me
mutually
. All the best, Monica.
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IELTS letter A letter of request to a friend in London

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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