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A letter of request to a friend in London

A letter of request to a friend in London 0AO6q

Dear Ann, Hope you are doing great! I am writing this letter to enquire about my traveling to London. I am going to visit London shortly and I believe you are the person who l am looking for. As I have never been to London before, I hope you have a little time to introduce me to the city. My reason for journeying is because I will have an important meeting on my business. Despite a short period the products we produce are promoted and attracted the interest of our foreign colleagues and we are invited to a two-day exhibition held in one of the commercial centers of London. I aspire to find a common understanding with our new friends and achieve signing an important contract which we need. I would be grateful if you could acquaint me with the sightseeings of historical England. As my time is limited three or four hours would be ideal if that is possible. I hope you answer me mutually. All the best, Monica.

Dear Ann, Hope you are doing great! I am writing this letter to Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.inquire
enquire
 about my traveling to London.

I am going to visit London shortly and I believe you are the person who l Did you mean "am I"?am I
am
 looking for. As I have never been to London This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
, I hope you have a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 time to introduce me to the city.

My reason for journeying is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I will have an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 meeting on my business. Despite a short period the products we produce are promoted
 and attracted the interest of our foreign Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).colleagues, and
colleagues and
 we are invited
 to a two-day exhibition held in one of the commercial centers of London. I aspire to find a common understanding with our new friends and achieve signing an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 contract which we need.

I would be grateful if you could acquaint me with the Possible spelling mistake found.sightseeingsight seeings
sightseeings
 of historical England. As my time is limited
 three or four hours would be ideal if that is
 possible.

I hope you answer me mutually
. All the best, Monica. 

IELTS letter A letter of request to a friend in London

Letter

American English

5 paragraphs

170 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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